Friday, January 14, 2011

My very late posts!


Film Analysis
I don’t know exactly what the post is supposed to exactly be but I am going to do my film analysis on the movie The Greatest Game Ever Played.
Francis Ouimet a poor caddy wants to play golf and is inspired by a professional golfer named Harry Vardon. After a long time of being a caddy he is given the chance to qualify for a tournament. He does not have the money for the entry fee. He makes a deal with his dad that by his dad giving him the fifty dollars he must qualify or he never plays golf again. He misses the cut by one put. He starts working for a sports store to try and make a living. He is approached by some old friends and the president of the golf association and asked to be one of the local competitors in qualifying for the US open. He first declines. Latter when he realizes his life’s dream he hurries to the course and gets ready for the tournament. He qualifies for the tournament. On the day of the start of the tournament his caddy does not show up but his friends younger brother is offering to caddy for Francis. His name is Eddie Lowery. He caddies for Francis. After a long hard tournament Francis finds himself able to compete with the best in the game. He continues to play hard and will all his effort and caddies advice he comes to a three way tie between Himself, Harry Vardon and Ted Ray. He victoriously comes in first place in a dramatic win and makes history.
A short play
I don’t know and was not able to find exact detail on what this assignment is. So I hope what I do works. I am just going to write a play in a story form or something..
Joe is an ordinary man, with an ordinary job. He as a ordinary wife named Susan and a ordinary son named mike. One day Joe is driving to work while listening to 99 red balloons. He doesn’t love the song but sings along anyway. He works at a insurance company and is one of the top sales men there. He actually enjoys his job and gets a lot of vacations.
-Susan-(takes place while Joe is Going to work)
Susan gets out of bed later than usual, and gets ready quickly because she needs to get Mike to school on time. Mike does not want to get out of bed. Susan then forces him out of bed by splashing cold water on his face. Mike gets ready slowly as Susan makes him and herself a quick breakfast of eggs and toast, which is mikes favorite.
Joe- Joe parks in his own parking spot and enters the doors of his work. He says hi to the receptionist Andrea with a half felt smile. Gets in the elevator to go to the seventh floor. One of his work buddies Jeff happens to be going up at the same time. They talk about last night’s baseball game with the Yankee’s vs. Red sox. They reach the seventh floor and they both walk through the main work area to their offices. Joe gets in his office, and comfortably sits in his nice chair. His office is decorated with  baseball pictures mainly of the Yankees.
Susan- Susan and mike finished eating and get into the car and pole out of the drive way and head for the school in a hurry. They get to the school, and mike gets out of the car and runs in the doors hoping to get to class before the bell rings. Susan now can’t wait until she is home so she can get to making the desert for tonight’s party.
Joe is sitting in his office getting ready for the big day at work. He gets a phone call to come up to the  tenth floor the top floor to talk to his boss. He gets in the elevator. Then all the sudden the elevator stops and the alarm is going off  he is freaking out and does not know what to do. He calls the home phone and nobody answers he then realizes that there is a fire and it is not just the elevator he is scared he leaves a personal message on the phone.
Susan- Susan gets home sits on the couch and just happens to pick up the phone the second before he is forced to hang up against his will to the scorching flames. Susan here’s him yelling had then hears nothing seconds latter which felt like forever. The End

  Song Lyrics
Song title- if everyone cared
Artist-nickleback
Plot- a man is not happy because the world does not love enough he wishes that there was more love like the love between him and his girl he loves. He loves life but wants to see more love in it.
Character-man, woman and the people of the world.
Conflict- wishing that the world had more love.
Theme- more love.
Setting- In the world some were talking to the world.

Blurbs
Song 1- Heartless, A man tells a story of a cold woman without a soul. He asks how she is so heartless. Trying to solve the problems they have.
Song 2- Replay, A man is lusting and in love with a girl, he cannot get her out of his head, he loves everything about her and wants to be with her for the rest of his life.
Song 3-Your Guardian Angel, a man talking about how he cannot and would not ever replace his girlfriend he is telling her how he feels towards her from his soul and heart.
Song 4- Bar Tender, a man (t-pain) meets a bar tender and out of all the girls in the club he singles her out as the one he likes the most and wants to get to know. He gets to know her and he gets in free to the club and more.
Song 5- Lean on me, It is a more soulful song. It talks about how you can count on someone to help you through your trial and pain. When times are hard and you are not strong someone will be your friend and help you carry on.





Tuesday, January 11, 2011

Open Mic

Iife is like a wave, you never know when it will crash.
School is like a old song, you want it to end.
Homework is like being sick, you dread the moment until it is over.
Writing is like art, you can create infinate things.
Poems are like girls, they seem to get better over time. sometimes.

50 Words

A man was sitting on a barstool at a barbacue joint in tennesee. A young man walks in and asks him do you know what you get when you play a country song backwards. He said that you get your whole life back and a lot more. A lot more.

The ten Sixers


 I am almost a right hander.
Schools for social life, not homework.
My worst fear is not having one.
I might know how to write.
You may think you know me.
Life is all about the wrongs.
I think that I don’t know.
Live like its your last day.
I thought things should go wrong.
So what if I cant write.

The Impulse 2

A man and a woman are waiting in line at Wal Mart.
M- Ugh, Why did we choose this line?
W- Because it has the magazine that I want.
M- Okay, lets make sure that we have everything before we get to the check out.
W- I am sure we do, I have gone through everything three times already.
M-  Okay, if we find out we have forgotten something I am not coming back to get it.
W- That’s fine with me because, I know that we have everything. Relax why are you in such a rush to get home?
M- This line is taking so long I am going to miss the start of the game.
W- It is just the beginning nothing exciting. You need to calm down please.
W- I made sure that I started the recorder before we left the house.
M- Thank you. Sorry for getting upset.

Impulse

A man and a woman are waiting in line at wal mart.
M- Why did we chose this line?
W- Because it has the magazine that I want.
M- Okay, lets make sure that we have everything.
W- I am sure we do, I have gone through it three times already.
M-  Okay, if we find out we forgot something I am not coming back to get it.
W- That’s fine with me because, I know that we have everything relax.
M- This line is taking so long I am going to miss the start of the game.
W- You need to calm down.
W- I made sure that I started the recorder before we left.
M- Thanks.

Wednesday, October 20, 2010

Don't read me

I have no life
I have no time to talk to my wife
I lost my job
My uncles name is bob
Fish stink
Pigs are fat
That is what i think about.
I am now homeless
I eat crap.
Boats are cool.